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Some people think that the amount of noise one makes should be strictly controlled. Others believe one should be free to make as much noise as one wishes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern era, there are many sound-polluting instruments which
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people are using. Many argue that
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 pollution should be strictly banned, and some think that it is inevitable to avoid
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 for that
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one should be allowed to make as much sound as they want. Both
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views will be discussed before presenting my own opinion. On the one hand, in the modern era, it is becoming very common the use
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sound systems to celebrate every festival or function. The people are not bothered by the allowable decibel range.
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 reason, many people are becoming frustrated and getting ear-related issues and even heart attacks. To control the
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 pollution, the government should make some regulations regarding the efficient and effective use of
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 instruments .
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, there are certain conditions in life that are impossible to avoid
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,
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 as sirens of ambulances, fire brigade alarms, which are mainly used to save human lives.
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, if there is a need for the shifting of a patient, in
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, if there are protests on social issues which
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 to be addressed before the government in
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 scenarios it cannot be avoided that a rising of voice. In conclusion,the government should make some rules and pass some regulations regarding the safe use of
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-producing instruments.
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, there are situations where
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 cannot be restricted. But a joint effort can be made to reduce the
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 pollution, to make a pleasant society.

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organization
Plan your essay with a clear map: intro, two body paragraphs for both views, and a short ending that states your stance.
cohesion
Use simple link words to tie ideas: first, also, but, for example, in addition.
grammar
Watch grammar. Short, clear sentences help a lot. Check subject-verb and noun endings.
task response
Make your position clear in the last part and keep all points linked to this view.
examples
Give a real example for each point that makes your view easy to see.
content
The essay points to both sides and ends with a view.
content
It uses examples like sirens to show when noise is needed.
structure
There is a plan with an intro, body and conclusion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • mental and physical well-being
  • hearing loss
  • sleep disturbances
  • stress levels
  • freedom of expression
  • cultural expression
  • social interactions
  • economic benefits
  • property values
  • tourism and hospitality
  • entertainment and construction industries
  • thoughtful noise regulations
  • public health
  • economic and cultural considerations
  • zone-based noise control
  • flexibility
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