The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.
The diagram illustrates the process of a
frog
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passing through an eight-step reproduction cycle, from egg to adulthood.
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, the cycle commences with two
frogs
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mating
and
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, and
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it ends with a newly produced
frog
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which becomes fully mature. Now getting back to details,
Followed
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followed
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by mating, the female
frog
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leaves a number of eggs in the water,
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to waiting 7-10 days for them to become tadpoles.
This
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creature grows and develops
due to
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nutrition from algae in 6 weeks ,which
this
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step lasts until the leg formation is
complete
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complete,
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for them to easily move on the ground. As the development continues,
frogs
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gain the ability of pulmonary breathing
which
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, which
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this
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development allows them to breathe outside of the water
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they become young
frogs
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nearly
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apply
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in
27
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about 27
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weeks. Eventually, after 4 years of waiting, they are considered
as
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adult
frogs
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. The life cycle of
frogs
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repeats itself when the new adult
frog
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reproduces and lays eggs.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frog, frogs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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