A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time vountary/unpaid work. you would like to do some voulntary work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary work in letter. explain why you want to do voluntary work at museum. describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear Mam/Sir I am writing
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letter in response to your
annoucement
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announcement
about the vacant position in the museum as a
voulntary
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volunteer
/unpaid worker. I have just completed my business management diploma
and
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i
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I
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want to gain some experience as a voluntary worker because in my
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home
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country
me
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and my family
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had
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also
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do
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vountary
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voluntary
work
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like to provide
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food ,
shelters
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, books and clothes to needy people. Doing
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voluntary
work always
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and
motivate
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me , and the best
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is that
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in the
museum
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museum,
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can gain more
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knowledge
about the past history of
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country
which
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can help me in future somewhere. Talking about my qualities,
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do have computer skills and I can work more than 12 hours consistently,always pay attention to the
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detail
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detail,
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whatever is given .
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but not
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least ,
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have
friendly
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nature and a good customer service experience.
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,
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live just 10 minutes away from
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museum
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,
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apply
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its
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it's
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easy to commute
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Looking forward to
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a positive response from your side. Yours faithfully Jasmeen kaur

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grammar
Check the spelling of key words like voluntary and announcement. Use 'Dear Sir or Madam' and a proper 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely'.
structure
Make each paragraph focus on one idea. Start with why you want to help, then your skills, then availability.
vocabulary
Use simple, clear words. Avoid long or tricky phrases. Keep sentences short.
content
Ask for a chance to talk more and give a way to contact you.
content
You show care for others by talking about past help you gave.
logistics
You mention easy travel to the museum.
tone
You keep a polite tone at the end.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time volunteer
  • cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • museum curator
  • customer liaison
  • public speaking
  • team collaboration
  • scheduling availability
  • artifact preservation
  • educational workshops
  • multilingual communication
  • curatorial assistance
  • event coordination
  • visitor services
  • exhibit maintenance
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