Some people believe that in the future, most cities will become unlivable due to pollution and overcrowding. Others think technological innovation will solve these problems. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some think that scientific interventions are more effective in increasing
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others argue that allowing
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to grow without any artificial techniques is more beneficial for people’s health. As far as I’m concerned, I partly agree with the view that
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cultivation should be carried out naturally for the sake of human health and the environment. On the one hand, there are several reasons why technological innovations are likely to help in growing
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more efficiently. The first and foremost reason is that, as the global population continues to rise steadily, the demand for
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increases, which in turn cannot be met without scientific innovation. Technology-driven agricultural methods enable farmers to
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productivity in a shorter period of time.
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, these methods do not require a long cultivation period.
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, these products are more resistant to various environmental conditions,
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as insects and diseases, and they are less likely to decay or lose their nutritional values over time. All things considered, the techniques used in modern agriculture can be beneficial for
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production.
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, I agree with those who claim that organic farming offers a more suitable and healthier alternative compared to technology-based agricultural practices. Owing to the non-use of chemical products, soil productivity can be maintained in the long term, and production continues without disrupting the natural ecosystem.
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, biodiversity is enhanced, as organic farming helps preserve various species of plants and animals. I think the most important factor is
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nutritional value is protected. In doing so, the antioxidant levels remain high, making organic
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a healthier option for consumers.

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structure
State a clear plan in the first line to show what you will do in your essay.
structure
Add one clear opening and one short ending that restate your view.
content
Give clear examples to back your view.
grammar
Fix small grammar and use simple, easy words.
coherence
Use more linking words to show how ideas are tied.
content
You show both sides and your own view.
coherence
You use signposts like 'On the other hand' and 'In addition'.
task
Your opinion is clear.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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