Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

It has been said that studying in another

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country

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of time during high school or university. In my opinion, the advantages of education abroad outweigh any potential drawbacks.

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the one hand, living alone in a new culture can

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fosterself-reliance

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self-reliance

, personal growth and independence. To be more precise, it can

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develop

some skills like

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money

managment

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management

, standing on your own feet,

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language

problem solving

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skill

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skills

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, which

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useful for students who want to

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study

abroad.

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, living and

studing

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studying

abroad has

potential

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the potential

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to significantly improve

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your lifestyle

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in a positive way and it can

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broaden

your horizon,

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your experience and knowledge.

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the other hand, high financial cost can be a concern. By

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I mean that in

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terms

of financial, it can be stressful and costly.

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, tuition fees, living expenses,

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cost

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can be a significant financial burden.

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the potential benefits of

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studying

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abroad

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considerable, there are

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genuine

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concerns

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about it.

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experience depends on the student's level of preparation, flexibility and financial support.

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Nov 13, 2025

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coherence

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task response

Have a clear start and a clear end. State your view at the end.

clarity

Give one clear example for each point to support it.

content

You show a view that studying abroad can have good sides.

coherence

You mention both sides of the issue.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Exposure
Diverse cultures
Global awareness
Improves language skills
Enhances employment prospects
Develops independence
Self-reliance
Homesickness
Cultural shock
High costs
Tuition
Living expenses
Educational systems
Styles of teaching
Isolated
Disconnected
Reintegrating

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