The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The pie charts compare different types of dealt methods for
waste
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products
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disposal methods
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in three countries.
Overall
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, undergrounding is the most widely-used approach to treating hazardous
waste
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in Sweden and the United Kingdom,
in contrast
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to Korea
which
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, which
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rely
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relies
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mainly on recycling.
Furthermore
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, the United Kingdom has a more varied set of
waste
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handling approaches. In Korea, the most significant share of dangerous
waste
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products (69%) is recycled. The second highest proportion occupy by 22% is buried underground
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while
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less than half
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this
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figure is incinerated.
On the other hand
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, Sweden more favours landfills over the other two approaches since more than half of all dangerous
waste
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is buried underground. There is little difference between the shares of recycling and burning, as the former accounts for 25%
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the share of the latter is lower by a margin of 5%. The United Kingdom most popular method is burying, which contributes 82% like in Sweden.The UK
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dumps 8% of its
waste
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at sea
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treating a similar proportion with chemicals to render it harmless. Incineration is responsible for 2%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous waste
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • waste management
  • percentage
  • burial
  • environmental impact
  • strategy
  • comparison
  • significant
  • methodology
  • effective
  • implications
  • trend analysis
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