The diagrams show changes in a student common room

The given maps illustrate how a student's common room has been modified between five years ago and now.

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it is clear that

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the place underwent significant changes, mainly in the south-east corner and in the centre, where the number of tables and chairs was replaced with new furniture. Looking at the initial map, at the top of the layout, there was kitchen furniture,

such

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as s sink, a cupboard, two benches, a microwave, and a refrigerator. Moving to the centre of the area, there were four round tables, which were occupied by six chairs.

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, in the student common room was a bookshelf on the south-east side. Turning to the remaining diagram, it is evident that 1 out of 2 benches has been replaced with a new microwave. The bookshelf was removed,

as a result

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, the right side has been opened new spaces for new facilities: three armchairs, a drink, and a television.

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what is shown, two tables have been replaced with a bench for laptops

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and a rectangular table with chairs.

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Nov 17, 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

175 words

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