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More and more universities are replacing face-to-face teaching with online courses. Do you think that this is a positive negative development?

There is no denying the fact that nowadays, several universities have changed many things in their techniques, especially in how
students
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 receive information and understand the material. More universities are replacing face-to-face teaching with online courses. Some people are satisfied with
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 phenomenon and consider it the best for them, but there is
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 an argument that opposes it.
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 essay will discuss
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 topic from both points of view, and I will express my personal opinion.
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 with, there are many advantages to
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 situation.
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students
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 can learn and focus better from their homes and attend from anywhere at any time, which will benefit international
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.
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they can save all recorded lectures and science videos and review the lesson as many times as they need.
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,
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 helps them share lectures with their colleagues and discuss them.
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, onsite teaching sometimes outweighs online courses in several ways.
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, teachers can interact with
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 and teach more proficiently.
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,
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 can understand the material more effectively and take some tests under the teacher's observation.
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, some people cannot learn or gain information in online sessions and prefer face-to-face lessons. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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 question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages if
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 control and focus their distractions and stay focused. With proper guidance and time limits set by the student, online learning can be a powerful tool that supports
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' development more than it harms them.

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development
Add more exact ideas with facts or details to show why online learning helps or hurts. Give one or two strong points in each side.
cohesion
Use clear link words to guide the reader and keep a simple plan in each body part.
content
The essay shows a balance of both sides and a clear view at the end.
structure
There is a clear intro and a clear final part.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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