The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The maps provide key information about the changes that have taken place in Kimsville between 2002 and the present day.
Overall
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, it is clear that Kimsville has undergone substantial redevelopment, with several features either relocated or transferred.
In addition
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, the 2002 layout showed a symmetrical design,
whereas
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the present day stands out for a clear shift to a more functional and diversified
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design.
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According to
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what is shown, in 2002 , Kimsville was centrally located between the shopping
centre
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and the old cinema. with a city
centre
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being in the middle. It features shopping, many trees.
while
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the factory and the city
centre
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were situated on opposite sides. In terms of the current situation, it has become the
centre
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of the place. The city stays consistently in the middle. The factory was replaced by a software company
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Moreover
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, the old cinema turned into a pub , and the new train station, footable and new apartments
constructed
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were constructed
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, leaving the place.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • commercial facilities
  • economic growth
  • population expansion
  • employment opportunities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • environmental conservation
  • industrial areas
  • urban development
  • transformation
  • relocation
  • quality of life
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