In Britain,when someone gets old they often go to live in a homewith other old people where there are nurses to look after them.Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care,the government or the family?

There is a phenomenon that old

people

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tend to live together to share the medical resources provided by the

government

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. The discussion that who should pay for

this

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care

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really

draw

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attention

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of citizens. From my point of view, the

government

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should

afford

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most of the

cost

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while

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the family should pay for

this

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care

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at a reasonable and affordable level. The local

government

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ought to take

care

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of the old

people

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because the

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has the responsibility. The old

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usually contributed a lot to social development when they were young

and

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they have paid the tax. So the

government

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should

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have

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the society health-

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fund for the old

people

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.

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, some

families

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have difficulties

on

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affording group

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for their

old

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older

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parents.

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, they may have less time and energy to take

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of the old person by themselves. So they really need the group

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for their parents provided by the

government

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.

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, some old

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people

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who have no

families

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probably have no extra income to pay for the health-

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bill

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.

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, if the

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can afford most of the

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of group

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for the

old ones

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elderly

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, many

families

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can benefit from it.

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,

families

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should pay the

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at a reasonable and affordable level to avoid unfairness. If all the

cost

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is covered by the

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government

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while

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the

families

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will not pay any money, it is a kind of wasting

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apply

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social resources because there will be lots of

families

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apply

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for the service at no

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and

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the nurses and the facilities can not meet everyone’s demand.

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result

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those who really need the health

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service can not get it. If

families

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pay the rest of the

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, it is a good way for the

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to filter

the one

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out those

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who

is

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eager to do so. In conclusion, it is a good way for the local

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to afford the majority of the

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and

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the

families

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pay the rest of the

bill

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. The

government

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fulfill

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fulfils

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their responsibility and the

families

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pay at a low

cost

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to have the service in an efficient way.