Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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of

vehicles

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as cars,

truck

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are

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increasing day by day around the globe.

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some

people

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argue that

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reducing the maximum speed of

vehicles

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can be a possible solution regarding the improvement of

road

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safety

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, others think there are other ways to deal with

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problem.

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views of the statement regarding

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issue

elaborated

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are elaborated

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further

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with relevant examples.

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, high-speed

vehicles

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are responsible for most of the traffic accidents that are happening around the world

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are definitely hampering

road

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safety

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.

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, drivers

are

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apply

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often

trends

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tend

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to break down the traffic rules by

maximizing

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maximising

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their

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vehicles

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vehicles'

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speed

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, which

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cause

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causes

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troubles

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trouble

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to

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in

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the surroundings and sometimes

resulted

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results

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in serious

damages

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damage

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. In

additon

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addition

, those

type

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types

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of

vehicles

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which run at a higher speed are quite expensive.

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, owner of

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this

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these

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vehicles

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are often rich and they always try to show off their wealth by running those things.

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, sometimes

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this

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rich guys arrange car racing

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on

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a

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apply

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busy streets

which

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, which

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is one of the main reasons

of

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for

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car

accident

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accidents

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happening around the world.

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this

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, there are some other factors like

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apply

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drinking alcohol, driving after spending

sleepless

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a sleepless

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night, tiredness,

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and frustation

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frustation

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frustration

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that can

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be some root causes why

people

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drive fast in the street.

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,

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every day

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everyday

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everyday,

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numerous numbers of

people

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number of

people

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injuring

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injured

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and dying because of

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this type

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these types

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incidents

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of incidents

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. So, many individuals believe that decreasing the speed limit of these

vehicles

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can be a remedy.

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,

ohters

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others

give

diffrent

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different

types of opinions which can be a possible solution regarding

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issue. Some

people

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think the government should take necessary steps and implement rules and regulations more strictly to reduce those

occurances

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occurrences

caused by high-speed

vehicles

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.

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, the authority can

also

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new sophisticated

high tech

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high-tech

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device that can observe the

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and

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there should be capital punishment

to

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for

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rule breakers

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and most

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important

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importantly

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thing is to

raise

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raising

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awareness among the

people

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which

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apply

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can help them

to

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apply

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understand the negative sides of driving at a fast

speed

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speeds

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without any reason.

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after

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analysing both

views

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views,

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i

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I

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agree

with

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apply

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that not only limiting the speed of the

vehicles

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can

alon

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alone

solve the

road

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safety

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issue. In my

opinion

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opinion,

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the authorities need to take essential steps

and

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, and

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i

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I

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believe that applying those steps can improve

road

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safety

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.