The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps give information about how a college
campus
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has developed between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, the maps show that between 2005 and 2015, the sizes of
sevaral
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several
buildings
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in
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on
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the
campus
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had changed
and
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, and
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some facilities
have
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were
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constructed. Let's begin by looking at the
campus
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map in 2005. A
play ground
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playground
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was in the north east of the
campus
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and
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, and
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a parking lot was to the south of the playground. In the north west of the
camus
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campus
, there were three
school
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buildings
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and
,
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apply
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there was a stadium
beteween
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between
the
school
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buildings
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and the
play ground
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playground
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. An office building and dining
hall
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were in the
south west
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southwest
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of the
campus
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. There had been several changes the the college
campus
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in 2005 and 2015. In the north east of the
campus
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, the playground still
remaind
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remained
,
while
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the parking lot had been moved
in
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to
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the north west of the
campus
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and
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, and
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a library and the dining
hall
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occupied the space where the former parking lot
.
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had been.
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Meanehile
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Meanwhile
, the building where it was used as a dining
hall
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was coverted
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coverted
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converted
by
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into
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a student centre. The
nuber
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number
of
school
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buildings
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had been reduced from three to two
and
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, and
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the
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apply
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one of the
school
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buildings
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had been replaced by a clinic. The size of
stadium
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the stadium
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had been
little
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a little
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smaller than
2005
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in 2005
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,
while
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the office building and the student centre where former dining
hall
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had
been
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were
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longer.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words campus, buildings, school, hall with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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