You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share a challenge I encountered during my trip to Canada at the airport on September 25, which truly annoyed me. My flight number was 2235 at 10 p.m. from Tabriz to Canada. The problem that really disappointed me was your staff's behaviour. They behaved in a rude way when I asked them about the delay that had been occurring.

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, I waited a long time at the check-out station, since your internet connection broke down suddenly, which made me feel a wave of stress wash over me. I would kindly suggest that you enhance your staff's communication skills and hire someone who can manage these situations more efficiently.

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, it would be much better to change your internet connectivity to a stable and speedy one, since Tabriz, as a place that annually hosts a large number of tourists from all around the world, should provide unique services for them. Thank you for your consideration and time. I look forward to improvements in these issues. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi

m.hadavi20

Nov 25, 2025

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structure

Try to put one main idea in each paragraph and link it to the next.

grammar

Keep sentences short and simple.

format

Make the flight details stand out, put them on a new line or bullet.

content

Explain the problem in two clear parts: people and system.

instruction

Ask for a clear action you want the airport to take.

content

The letter has a clear goal and asks for an action.

content

Flight details are given to show the trip.

tone

Tone is polite and respectful at all times.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

flight details
flight number
arrival time
departure time
baggage claim
customer service
long queues
staff attitude
improvement suggestions
enhanced training
clear signage
lost luggage
travel experience

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