The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The illustration depicts several activities conducted by a huge number of people at a social centre in Melbourne , Australia for started from 2000 to 2020.
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, it can be seen , people who participated in the film club reached a huge peak,
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musical performance showed the least
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, three actions, which met together at the same point in specific years. In the graph,
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the activity of the film club remained almost constant at the starting and ending points, which started at almost 65. In the middle, it reached 60 tons in 2010; eventually , it reached
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year (2020) with a measure of almost 65.
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, Musical performance as the minimum level of visitors, which first two years were level out, and afterwards it gradually rose to reach the final number of almost 20. When looking at the other three enterprises,
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as Martial arts , amateur dramatics and table tennis. These actions were started with numbers respectively almost 20 , 25 and 35.
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, these three actions were met in two different points, which were in amount of 20 in 2010 and almost 40 in 2015.

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  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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