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With the rise of artificial intelligence, some believe creative fields like writing and music composition will become largely automated. To what extent do you think that AI's increasing role in creative endeavors will enhance or diminish human artistic expression?

In the contemporary world, it is believed that in the future
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 many creative fields,
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 as art,
music
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, and literature, artificial
intelligence
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 will be used for composition and idea generation. I believe that
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 trend will not affect the
expressions
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 and
emotions
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 of the artists. Emotional
expressions
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 are lacking in artificial
intelligence
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 tools. As they are considered robots, they do not have feelings,
emotions
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,
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expressions
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 like human beings. It has features and functions to copy the sounds and styles of an artist, but it cannot introduce feelings or personal experiences as a musician in the songs. There are many artists,
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, Taylor Swift and Billie Eilish; both singers have different notes and types of
music
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. These female musicians always share their
emotions
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 in the form of a song. Artificial
intelligence
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 provides facilities related to the generation of new ideas and in enhancing styles of writing and songs;
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, it cannot express the way of portraying a story or making a sequence in lyrics on the basis of an artist's experience.
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, sometimes it generates the same style of
music
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 and writing, which can affect copyrights. Simply, it will not be capable of diminishing the artistic way of
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expressions
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, as it does not have any feeling inserted in its applications. To illustrate, K-pop
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 has an energetic vibe,
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 classical
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 has relaxing rhythms.
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, some writers' themes might be based on
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 they have experienced in their lives. In conclusion, I consider that artificial
intelligence
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 creativity does not have the features to diminish the
emotions
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,feelings,
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expressions
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 of a writer or musician.
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, it can support the generation of new ideas and make a composition more attractive. Word Count: 276

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structure
Start with a clear view in the first paragraph and restate your view in the last paragraph.
coherence
Link ideas with simple, clear words. Use signposts like 'for example', 'also', 'however', and 'in addition'.
content
Give more clear and direct examples and explain why they show your point.
language
Check grammar and use a wider mix of short and long sentences to avoid simple pattern.
language
Avoid repeating the same idea and keep your words simple but strong.
argument
Your view is clear that AI will not end human emotion in art.
content
You name real singers to back your point.
balance
You say AI can help with ideas but cannot feel, which shows balance.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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