The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.

The bar chart compares the number of prisoners in five
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— Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, the United States and Canada — at six time points between 1930 and 1980.
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, Great Britain consistently had the smallest prison population,
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the United States recorded the largest numbers throughout the period. Notably, the US saw a steady increase and reached a peak in 1980,
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the remaining
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showed more fluctuating patterns. In Great Britain, the number of inmates rose gradually from around 30,000 in 1930 to approximately 80,000 in 1980.
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, the US started at about 100,000 and climbed continuously to roughly 140,000 by the end of the period, remaining the highest among all five
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. Other
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experienced irregular changes. Australia dropped sharply from just above 70,000 in 1930 to about 40,000 in 1940, before rising steadily to around 60,000 in 1970 and
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declining slightly in 1980.
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, New Zealand fell from around 110,000 to nearly 50,000 in 1950, but later recovered to almost 90,000 in 1980. Canada decreased modestly from roughly 120,000 to 110,000 in 1940,
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increased to about 130,000 by 1950, fell to around 80,000 in 1970, and
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rebounded to about 90,000
at the end
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of the period.

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