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Writing Samples
Band 4

Your city library is closing for renovation for three month

Hey Usmonali, Did you hear that our library is closing for
renew
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? I am very depressed because it is my favourite place that I go
in
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to in
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 my free time. I think the
menegment
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management
 should organise it faster. It would help members continue reading their favourite books. Dear
sir
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Sir
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 Adem, Thank you for
notice
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notifying
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 me about
this
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 situation. I am really upset because l like
read
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to read
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 your books. The repair should
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be mordern
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mordern
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modern
 and
be
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apply
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completed as soon as possible. Customers would be happy there. I think your cafe is the best. Your saithfully Bek

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task
State one clear goal in each letter. In the first letter, tell what you want and how it helps.
structure
Keep the text on one topic. Do not mix two people or goals.
grammar
Use clear sentences and correct punctuation.
coherence
End with a short line to sum up your request.
language
Check spellings and small word use so the read is easy.
content
Shows you care for the library and the people who use it.
tone
Polite tone and good use of greeting and closing.
content
There is a call for action and a clear wish for read to go on.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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