The map shows a public park (Grange Park) when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

There is a map, which illustrates the Grange

Park

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when it was constructed in 1920 and

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this

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the

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park

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nowadays.

Overall

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,

this

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park

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has completely changed over the

last

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century. The current and the outdated versions of the

park

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have nothing in common, except the locations of

an

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the

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entrance and one rose

garden

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. At the beginning, the

park

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constantly has a rectangular form with two entrances, which are located on opposite sides of the rectangle. The first one is on Eldon Street , and the other one is on Arnold Avenue. Noticeably, in the centre of

this

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park

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in 1920 was a fountain, but it has been replaced by the rose

garden

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and the seats surrounding it.

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, left to the first entrance, there

were

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another rose

garden

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and a stage for musicians with seats around it.

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, today, the amphitheatre for concerts occupies

their

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its

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area. On the other side, a water feature has been created in the area of 1920

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park’s

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glasshouse and seats.

Finally

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, the rose

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and pond for water plants have been removed.

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, new

café

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cafés

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and

playground

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playgrounds

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are now being placed in

this

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area.