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The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

The pie charts
presents
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present
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 data on the proportion of
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fores
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forests
 and timber in South
America
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,
Africa
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, Asia, Europe, and North
America
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.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the percentages of
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fores
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forest
 in five regions are lower than the proportions of timber,
whereas
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 the pattern is
reverse
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 for
Africa
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.
According to
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 the first chart, the rate of
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 in
Africa
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 is the highest, roughly at 27%, followed by North
America
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, which is 2% lower than
Africa
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's percentage. Compared with Asia and South
America
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with
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 14% and 16%, Europe has relatively more
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fores
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foresight
, at 18%. As for the second chart, North
America
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 has the largest share of 30%,
in contrast
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 to
Africa
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 in
which
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where
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 timber is the least of other continents, at 9%.
While
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 18% of timbetr was recorded in Asia, Europe and South
America
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 contribute small fractions, at 20% and 23%, respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fores, america, africa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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