The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

The graph provides data on both location and types of dance sessions young individuals in a town in Australia are currently taking part in.
Overall
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, private studio is the most popular site compared to other sites,
whereas
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college-based studio has the least popularity among other categories,and both school halls and community halls & others are almost
close
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in rate. Ballet has the greatest number of young participants aged less than 11,
while
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Students at 11 to 16 are more involved in the modern classes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • attendance
  • community centers
  • dance schools
  • private studios
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • ballroom
  • analysis
  • popularity
  • accessibility
  • cost
  • cultural trends
  • media influences
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