The bar chart below shows the US' top ten processed food expoort markets for last year and six years ago.

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, the data show that export revenues increased markedly in almost all markets, with Canada consistently remaining the United States’ largest buyer.
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the ranking of major importers remained broadly similar over time, the scale of growth varied significantly between countries. Canada imported by far the highest value of processed foods in both periods, rising from about US$9.3
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six years ago to roughly US$13.2
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in the latest year.
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of the world
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accounted for a substantial share, peaking from US$6.3
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to US$11.0
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, making it the second-largest market. Among other countries, Mexico and the European Union were the next most important governments
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Mexico’s imports grew from US$4.0
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to US$6.1
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the EU showed
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moderate increase from US$2.6
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to US$4.4
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Japan followed, with only graduate growth, rising slightly from US$2.4
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to US$2.5
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. China, South Korea,
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the Philippines
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, Australia, and Hong Kong represented smaller markets
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but still experienced noticeable upward trends. China reached US$2.1
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, and South Korea rose from US$0.9
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to US$1.6
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. The Philippines, Australia, and Hong Kong showed steady increases, though their totals remained below US$1.5
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in the most recent year.
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, the United States saw widespread growth in processed food exports across nearly all major markets, with the most striking increases occurring in China and the rest of the
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world
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Canada continued to dominate to the end.

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