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The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.

The table chart compares the
usage
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 of five different modes of
traveling
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travelling
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 in European
nation
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nations
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 from 1995 to 2005 and shows the projection in 2015.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
usage
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 of air and
rail
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are
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is
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 expected to increase, the
bus
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mode
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 is expected to become less
prefer
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preferred
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 transport type.
Bus
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 and
rail
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types
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 were the popular
transports
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modes of transport
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 among European people in 1995, which recorded 56
million
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 and 38
million
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 respectively. The
usage
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 of
rail
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mode
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 increased significantly by
2005
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2005,
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 with only 48
million
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 passengers,
while
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bus
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mode
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 showed a slight decrease, reaching 50
million
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,
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;
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 it remains the highest
mode
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 in 2005. Air, bicycle, and motorbike represented the smallest numbers throughout the period. In the future, in 2015,
although
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bus
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usage
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 is expected to fall to about 42
million
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, other
transports
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transport
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 are projected to increase. Travelling by air and
rail
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 will become the popular
types
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 compared to other
types
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. The total
of
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usage of
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usage
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 transport
types
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 shows an upward trend over the period and is projected to reach
to
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approximately 130
million
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 in 2015.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, rail, bus, mode, types, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Transportation preferences
  • Trends and shifts
  • Technological advancements
  • Urban policies
  • Substantial increase
  • Infrastructural developments
  • Projection
  • Environmental policies
  • Technological innovations
  • Electric vehicles
  • Smart public systems
  • Shared transportation
  • Transformation trends
  • Responsiveness
  • Transport policies
  • Sustainability aspects
  • Eco-friendly commute
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