The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?

The table chart illustrates the data from 2 surveys that were conducted in 1980 and 2010 over three decades on various features in a particular city, which are measured by percentage.
Overall
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, in both years, there were six aspects that were education, healthcare, environment, shops, employment and
lastly
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transport. In
this
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survey it collected three data were divided into good, bad and neither good nor bad. In 1980, healthcare was 82% good, followed by education and environment , 72% each . Below 10% of them were considered bad. Next were the shops that were 64, followed by employment at 62%, and transport being the lowest at 52%. Under 25% of the survey respondents, in that particular year, considered neither good nor bad. In 2010, education improved the most, reaching 82%, followed by employment at 72%.
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, both healthcare and transport decreased, falling to 72% and 39%. Environment and shops
also
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dropped slightly to 71% and 60%.
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, bad reviews increased to 38%,
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the lowest negative rating was 9%. The highest rating, 24%, and the lowest, 5%, did not change much.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • percentage
  • trend
  • satisfaction
  • urban planning
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • safety
  • security
  • perception
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • development
  • legislation
  • initiatives
  • community well-being
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