The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates how old the people of Iceland were from 1990 to 2020.
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, we can see that individuals who are
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25 to 54 had the highest percentage,
while
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on the other hand
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, citizens
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55 to 64 had the lowest proportion.
According to
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the data given, in 1990 and 2000, the elders who
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65 and over had the same percentage, which was about 12%. The number increased in 1990 by 1% for the middle-aged;
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, in 2000, it decreased by 1%. As for young teens, the share rose to a similar ratio, which was over 30%.
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, in the two years, 2010 and 2020, the percentage for the elderly dropped
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for both
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the
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years, but for women and men who are 65 and over, it escalated even more than before. As for the adults, they skyrocketed,
being
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over 40% in 2020 and over 35% in 2010. As for the children, in 2010 and 2020, they had around 22% and 19%, respectively.

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