The line graph below shows the avarage monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The report drives a line chart which illustrates the average

temperatures

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Paris

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Dubai

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and

Sydeny

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Sydney

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, it is clear from the chart that there are fluctuate in

temperatures

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in these three cities. In detail,

Paris

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and

Dubai

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recorded the highest

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degree

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temperatures

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from July to August with 20

and35

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and 35

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degree

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degrees

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respectively.

Also

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Dubai

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have a higher level of

temperatures

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compared

whith

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with

Paris

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and

Sydeny

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Sydney

, which is the

nature

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natural

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weather in

Dubai

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While

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Sydeny

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Sydney

recorded the highest

degree

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Jan

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January

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with around 24

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degree

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degrees

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and falling the

degree

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reach

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apply

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degrees in

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July

and

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, and

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then

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slightely

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slightly

back again to increase to

reach

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apply

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degree

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degrees

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Moreover

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, when we

looking

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look

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at the rest of

data

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the data

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, the remaining figures fall between the highest and lowest values.

To sum

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up,

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we could say that

Paris

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have

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has

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a lower

dergree

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degree

in average

temperatures

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and the maximum score

thet

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that

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it reach

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reach

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reaches

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is 20

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degree

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degrees

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Punctuation problem

, oppsite

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oppsite

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opposite

Dubai

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Punctuation problem

, to

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reach

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reaches

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the highest level around 36

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Dec 15, 2025

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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, paris, dubai, degree with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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154 words

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