The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the revenues of retail shops that sell on websites online in the country of Canada in the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
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, we can see that the percentage is changing for each sector in each
year
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, and
also
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,
it is clear that
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the category with the highest sales was electronics
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the lowest was home furnishings.
According to
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the data given, in 2005, video games had a profit worth 18%, and it rose by 5% in the second
year
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. As for house decor and supplies, it was 25%, but unfortunately, because of the low income of the business, it decreased by 10% in 2010. As for food and beverages, it is noticeable that it was 22%;
however
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, the number increased by 10%, showing that it was bought the most in 2010. As for
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devices and appliances, it was the top proportion in the first
year
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mentioned, yet it dropped by 5% in the following
year
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accounted for
  • notable decrease
  • significant increase
  • steady growth
  • modest increase
  • sharp decline
  • percentage of online sales
  • retail sectors
  • pie charts
  • comparison
  • over the five-year period
  • largest share
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