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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (in millions). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table shows the difference in individuals who went for international
travel
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,
such
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 as Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, and the Middle East, from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, the number of
people
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 travelling to different countries witnessed a significant fluctuation in the five areas. It can be seen from the table in the Europe
Area
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 that the data of
people
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 who went to
travel
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 was the highest,
while
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 the opposite was true in the Middle East
Area
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.
Besides
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, the figures for the five areas were rising. In terms of Africa, the number of
people
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 going for international
travel
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 increased from 18.2 to 28.7
million
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 between 1990 and 2005. The data of Asia and the Pacific
Area
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 rocketed quickly from 60.2
million
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 in 1990 to 135.8
million
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 in 2005. In the Middle East
Area
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, the value of
people
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 going to
travel
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 rose slightly between 1990 and 2005, from 9.8 to 15.8
million
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. Regarding the data for the American
area
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, individuals went to travelled experienced a jump between 1990 and 2005 from 80.5 to 113.2
million
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. In Europe, the statistics of persons who went to
travel
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 during the period from 1990 to 2005 showed an increase between 280.2 and 400.2
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travel, people, area, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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