The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates how Westley has developed from 1815 to the present. In general, it can be clearly seen that,

while

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Westley became significantly more industrial, it was

also

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transformed less green.

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, the Twine Toll Bridge, which led to London, and the Fields were knocked down to build a Railway and the Main Railway Station. Lord Westley's House was given over to Lenston Hotel and The Red Lion.

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, the Coach Inn was turned into a Sports Centre , and there was

also

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a Museum built nearby.

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, Lenton Housing Estate was built in place of Lenton Woods, but Lake Lenton stayed the same. The Church became the West Gate Shopping Centre.

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, the Houses were reconstructed to become

Business

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a Business

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and Residential Area. Some of the Fields were given away to extend the road and build a Cinema. There is

also

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a Shopping Business and Residential area

at the end

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of the road now.

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Dec 16, 2025

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156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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