The chart below gives information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The graphs below show the education levels by age range and gender in Glasgow in 2010.
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, the highest share of university degrees and school certificates was among younger groups,
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men had a slightly higher proportion of higher diplomas compared to women. The people in the 24-35 age range had the highest share of students with a higher degree, accounting for 76%, and 15% had school certificates. The same patterns can be seen for the 16-24 and 35-50 groups, with more than 70% and 20% respectively,
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in the 50-75
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the figures were 50% and 20%. The vast majority of people in the group 75-plus had no qualifications, at 72%. Among men, people
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graduated from a university were 32% of the total,
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among women the figure was smaller at 29%; at the same time, in both groups a
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part of them had no qualifications, 38% of women compared to 35% of men. Regarding the school certificates, the figures were the same, at 33%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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