The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The chart below illustrates the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in
Ireland
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, Italy,
Spain
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,
Sweden
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, and
Turkey
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in 2002.
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, those five countries spent the most on food/drinks/tobacco,
while
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the least expenses were on leisure/education.
Turkey
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and
Ireland
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recorded the highest expenditures
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,
while
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Sweden
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had the lowest.
Turkey
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was the country with the highest percentage of money spent on food/drinks
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/tobacco, with nearly 32%.
Ireland
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is the second in that category, with almost 29%,
while
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Spain
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, Italy, and
Sweden
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account for much lower figures: 18.80%, 16.36%, and 15.77%, respectively. In clothing/footwear, Italy accounted for a 9.00 % share of national consumer expenditures; meanwhile other four countries showed very similar figures:
Turkey
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6.63%,
Spain
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6.51%,
Ireland
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6.43%, and
Sweden
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5.40%. At the same time, leisure/education was the category with the lowest expenses, with
Turkey
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on top with 4.35%, Italy and
Sweden
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close to 3.2%, and
Ireland
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and
Spain
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with 2.21% and 1.98%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, sweden, turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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