The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides key information about the manufacturing process for making bamboo fabric.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that producing bamboo fabric is a multi-stage, closed-loop process that starts with growing the
plants
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and ends with using
this
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material in our daily lives.
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, the whole cycle is linear, depending on the final output.
According to
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what is shown in the figure, after growing
plants
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for a time in the spring session, the
plants
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will be harvested manually in the autumn.
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, cutting the bamboo
plants
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with an automatic machine into strips.
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crush these strips to transfer into a juice pulp. In the following stages, separate the long fibres from the liquid by a filter, add water and amine oxide to soften fibres, and spin the fibres. In the
last
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step,weave the material to make fabric, and we can now get something useful, like clothes, bags, and socks.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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