Nowadays, distance learning programs have gained popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The enrollment in online courses has become a subject of debate in recent years.

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can sympathise with both sides of the argument and my arguments will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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with, we know technology has rapidly developed,

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have access to all areas easily with the help of artificial science.

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, online courses and programs have increased

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society,

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the many benefits of using them. To be more specific, people who have a lack of time,

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reason they can not spend any time

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learning something. But the distance format of it

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can give more opportunity to them.

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, without any

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we can solve the distance trouble easily.

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, students who live in the countryside

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always face some dilemma in joining activities or programs.

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, despite the above-mentioned arguments, some

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argue that

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way can never be replaced by a hybrid form. To be

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, attending a college or university is a traditional and ancient part of the learning process. And more society

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that it is more effective to take part in face-to-face.

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, engaging in an online format has some challenges.

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. Some internet

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or a lack of technological equipment can destroy the quality of the education process.

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, we do not face

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complication in participating

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the designated area. In conclusion,

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strongly support that both ways are more important for people. If we can choose the best form

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our situation, we can get

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result

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of the process.