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the given table illustrates the forecasted costing over the next five years in American dollar for three three environmental project for sustainable foresty and the pie chart depicts anticipated expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year. the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.

The table and pie
chart
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 illustrate the values of the American dollar over the next five years for the different environmental projects for sustainable forestry, and the second
chart
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 shows the expenses contributed for the initial
year
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. In overview, in the first
year
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, the maximum value of Southeast Asia and West Africa,
while
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 Central America had the smallest amount. In the second graph, the highest amount was earned.
According to
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 the table
chart
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, Southcast Asia had a significant lead in the dollar
, in
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. In
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 the first
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year
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year,
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 it stood at 30
million
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, and after
that
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that,
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 it gradually increased by 50
million
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.
Moreover
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, West Africa
also
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 increased over the
year
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, from 10.5 to 3.5
million
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 in the five years.
However
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, Central America predicted the dollar rate would decrease from 20
million
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 to 5
million
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. The pie
chart
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 shows the former
year
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 the maximum value recorded by the income, which was 50%, followed
with
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by
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 32%
make
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making
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plan
Correct article usage
a plan
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 for the budget.
Similarly
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, skill development and operating expenses were at 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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