The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON

The map chart illustrates two locations where a new convenience store was decided for the town of Garlsdon. In overview, it is clearly shown that the S1

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is situated in the North West in the countryside,

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the S2

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is set in the middle of the diagram. The industry covered by the diagram had the highest ratio, which was at 12km to Hindon

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However

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, the residential area wrapped by the S2

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was far away from the Town centre. The rural areas are more than the other regions. The main roads were very close to the S1

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, and the S2 was positioned,

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as north west and the centre of the image.

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indicates that of the 16km to Bransdon growth of the people is around 15,000.

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, the railway track goes from the city to the rural areas.

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Dec 19, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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143 words

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The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?