The map below shows two possible sites (s1 and s2) of a new supermarket planned for the town of GARLSDON

The map chart illustrates two locations where a new convenience store was decided for the town of Garlsdon. In overview, it is clearly shown that the S1
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is situated in the North West in the countryside,
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the S2
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is set in the middle of the diagram. The industry covered by the diagram had the highest ratio, which was at 12km to Hindon
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.
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, the residential area wrapped by the S2
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was far away from the Town centre. The rural areas are more than the other regions. The main roads were very close to the S1
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, and the S2 was positioned,
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as north west and the centre of the image.
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indicates that of the 16km to Bransdon growth of the people is around 15,000.
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, the railway track goes from the city to the rural areas.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed
  • relative to
  • proximity
  • accessibility
  • impact
  • community
  • contrast
  • access
  • benefits
  • drawbacks
  • congestion
  • infrastructure
  • economic growth
  • reflection
  • environmental concerns
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