Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others,

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what those mean when someone do a crime like kill someone and the bad think ever in my opinion the criminel deserve the capitale

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because he put an soul in the death and when the criminel get

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mean to serve as a lesson to others who have the same idea or someone think to do the same but at all

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before the judge decide the

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he must be sure and have all evidence against the criminale to do

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because to mush peaple have

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and after that they found the person who was kill with punoshement are innocent and at

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point i'm

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belive tha capitale

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should not be used at the very least they can use the prisonment and I'm with the prisonment

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Dec 19, 2025

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structure

Plan your essay before you write. Start with a short view of the topic, then give two or three ideas in order, and finish with a simple conclusion.

grammar

Use simple, clear sentences. Check word order with the subject and verb. Use I think or in my view to show your view.

content

Give one or two clear examples to show your point. Do not add many long words. Stick to your main idea.

punctuation

Put a comma after a small pause and a full stop at the end of each sentence. Check spell and make words easy to read.

content

The writer shows a view on the topic.

structure

There is an effort to discuss both sides of the issue.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

162 words

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serious offenses
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life imprisonment
rehabilitation
legal system
fairness
wrongful convictions
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perspectives
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