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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world

The table compares six different areas of the world in terms of
forest
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land
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 in millions of
hectares
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 from 1990 to 2005.
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,
while
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 forested
land
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 in Europe was the highest figure, Oceania showed the lowest numbers over the
period
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. As the table shows, Europe's
forest
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land
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 was 989
million
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hectares
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 in 1990, and
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then
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 increases steadily to its peak, reaching 1001
million
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hectares
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. Oceanea had the least
forest
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land
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 among other regions , standing at only 199
million
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.
This
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 figure remained almost unchanged at 197
million
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 during the
period
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. Asia possessed 576
million
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hectares
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 of
land
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 in 1990
,
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 there was a slight increase to 584
million
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 by the end of the
period
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. The rest of the regions'
forest
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land
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hectares
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 showed a decrease over the
period
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. The figure for Africa accounted for 749
million
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 in 1990, and
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then
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 declined marginally to 691
million
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 in 2005. South America had 946
ton
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hectares
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of
forest
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land
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 in 1990.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, land, hectares, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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