You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

Dear Mr.Smith I’m writing to you to say that I have seen some
chinese
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courses on
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. I think that
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course will be very useful to
me and my colleague
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my colleague and me
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to improve our
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.
Through
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2 months Chinese delegation will arrive,and
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it would
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be
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If
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if
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us
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we
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could speak with them in
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native language.
This
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course is online, 3 times a week (On Monday, Wednesday and Friday) from 6
p.m
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p.m.
to 7:30 p.m. The course starts on 23 December and finishes on 10 April.
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will
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cost about 65£ for 2 people.
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, it will be very useful for our company, and from now on we will not call a translator. I would be very grateful if
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would cover all the expenses. We, in turn, will carry out these courses in a high-quality and responsible manner. I’m looking forward to hearing from you Sincerely yours, Laza Alina

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clarity
Add clear facts about the course: exact start and end dates, how long the course lasts, and cost per person.
structure
Make each idea in a new paragraph to help flow.
language
Fix grammar and spell: use 'Chinese', not 'chinese'; use 'it's' not 'it's will'; check punctuation.
content
Say exactly what help the company should give, like money or time off.
tone
The letter is polite and has a kind tone.
content
It states the idea to help the work by learn new skill.
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The letter gives some facts about the course and how it may save cost.
Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Training course
  • Useful
  • Manager
  • Details
  • Topics covered
  • Importance
  • Benefits
  • Work
  • Company
  • Help
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