The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works.

The graph illustrates the structure of a typical neuron and depicts how brain ‎messages are transferred to different parts of our

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.‎

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, it can be seen that a neuron can be divided

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three main parts, ‎including the head (cell

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and dendrites), the

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(axon), and terminals ‎which send neurotransmitters to other

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. ‎

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, after receiving the neural impulses by dendrites and processing ‎by

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, they move through

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the axon

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to reach the terminal buttons. Some neurons' ‎axons are covered by capsules, which are called the myelin sheath. These capsules ‎help brain

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to pass impulses rapidly. ‎

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followed by the process in the next part of the cell. At

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final ‎stage, multiple terminal buttons are considered to transfer neural messages by ‎making numerous junctions with target

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. These

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are ranging

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from ‎other neurons to other

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as muscle

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, the final ‎destinations of neurons might be various glands

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such

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as salivary glands or ‎thyroid.‎

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