The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparions where relevant

The diagram gives information about the process of how chocolate is manufacturated,

Overall

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, it consist of several stages inclusing hand- made and industrial techniques, beginning with the gathering

cocoa

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and end of the produced chocolate using special machines. At the beginning,

cocoa

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trees are the main products with ripe red pods. The pods which enrich in white

cocoa

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beans

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are harvested.

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this

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, all

beans

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are fermented, but it is important check up weather.

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the raeson, we must dry them under the sun. The dry cocoas are put in large sacks for delivering them factory. We need some train or lprry for transport them.

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, the manifacturing process is started in the fabrics. At the 350 celci temprature the all

beans

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must roasted and be ready for the next stage. They covered with shell on the outer,

that is

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why we need remove them for crushed them.

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, they are adden to equipment and at the

last

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stage, their inner part is used. It pressed and

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beans

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are became in the form of liquid. After all procedurs,

beans

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were chocolate.

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Dec 21, 2025

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Single idea per paragraph

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183 words

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The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparions where relevant

The plans below show the side of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.