The graph below presents percentage of commuters using different mode of transports in London in the years 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram below.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of commuter

transports

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transport

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in London in the years 1960, 1980, 2000, and 2010.

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, in 1980, the percentage recorded a minor difference among all transportation,

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other

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in other

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years

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experienced a major comparison. In 1960, the

commutes

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commute

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of

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rates of

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train

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trains

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stood at around 18%, before rising to over 25% in 1980. Commuters dropped to 22% and continued to decline and

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a low of 19% in 2010. Turning to car drivers, the figure accounted for 7% in the early

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.

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was followed by a significant jump to nearly 25% in 1980. Before soaring to above 45%, drivers recorded at approximately 37% in 2000.

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, the percentage of tube users began at 27%, and

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it decreased moderately to 22% in 1980.

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the

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number

rose to 25% in 2000, it continued to decrease by 5% in 2010.

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, bus commuters recorded at almost 35% at the beginning, which was followed by a noticeable decline to 27% in 1980.

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percentage fell significantly to 15% in 2000, and thereby it decreased marginally by 2% in 2010.