The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map gives information about the structure for a new industry and a place for housing, especially for workers.
Overall
Linking Words
, the complex consists of 4 main departments with additional facilities. Look at the west
side
Use synonyms
, we can observe two housing areas , to be clear , four houses at the north and 5 houses at the south
side
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
, there is a parking space and an office
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
above. To be contrast to the north area, homes are located separately on the south
side
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, analysing the eastern part, it was noticeable to emphasise significant differences. There are two vital places , which include industrial and housing areas. The housing area and the swimming pool were located on the east
side
Use synonyms
. The number of buildings was separated equally on both sides.
Moreover
Linking Words
, a meeting room was placed on the south-east
side
Use synonyms
, and an office was located on the north-west
side
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
, three industry buildings were constructed at the centre of the complex

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
What to do next:
Look at other essays: