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The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.

The line graph illustrates the average time spent on making
cars
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 by four companies,
such
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 as General Motors, Ford,
Toyota
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, and
Honda
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, in the US from 1998 to 2005. In overview, the General Motors and Ford companies spent more
hours
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 producing
cars
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,
while
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 the
Toyota
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 and
Honda
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 companies devoted almost the same
hours
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 to generating
cars
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. In 1992, General
motor
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 accounted for 32
hours
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 per vehicle, which decreased to 22
hours
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 by 2005. The initial Ford agency spent less time, which was 28
hours
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 per vehicle, and
then
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 it gradually increased by nearly 32
hours
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 in 2001. It has declined gradually over the period, which stood at nearly 22
hours
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. The diagram shows that the
Toyota
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 company and
Honda
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getting
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same
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the same
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hours
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 for producing
cars
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 in 1992, which was 22
hours
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 per automobile.
Afterward
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, they were opposite each other
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Toyota
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 company slightly increased by 1999,
whereas
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Honda
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 decreased by 20
hours
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, but it went up 24
hours
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 in 2001.
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, the
Toyota
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 company experienced
fluctuating
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 from 2001 to 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, toyota, honda, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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