The charts below show the proportion of hospitals in the United States that reported using complementary medicine between 1985 and 2010, and the most common complementary health approaches in 2012.

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additional medical

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used in U.S hospitals from 1985 to 2010. The second line

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shows the most popular health approaches (9 methods) that

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in 2012.

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, the

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of complementary medicine

incresed slighly

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increased slightly

up to 2000,

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increased sharply. The most

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complementary health approach was natural products,

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homeopathy

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and guided imagery were the least popular.  In the first line

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, the

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of hospitals

incresed

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increased

slowly from 2% to 7% between 1985 and 1995. Before

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increased

even more to 12%. After that year, the

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of hospitals

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increased

rapidly to 40%.  Returning to the second line

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, the most popular health

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approach

was natural products with 17%.

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followed deep breathing and yoga with 11% and 10%, respectively. Chiropractic, meditation and

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massage

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were similar from 7% to 9%. The least popular were special diets,

homeopathy

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homoeopathy

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and guided

imaginery

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imagery

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Dec 29, 2025

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