The diagram below describes the structure of a home smoker and how it works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given process diagram illustrates the internal structure of a household smoker and the way it functions to preserve the
food
Use synonyms
.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is evident that the process has three steps which
comences
Correct your spelling
commence
with the intake of
air
Use synonyms
Linking Words
while
Correct word choice
and
show examples
ends
Correct subject-verb agreement
end
show examples
with the preparation of smoked
food
Use synonyms
.
Initially
Linking Words
, the fresh
air
Use synonyms
flow
Correct subject-verb agreement
flows
show examples
get
Verb problem
apply
show examples
in to
Use the right word
into
show examples
the
ground level
Use the right word
ground-level
show examples
pit through a lid which left
half opened
Use the right word
half-opened
show examples
.
Next,
Linking Words
the
air
Use synonyms
flow moves
in to
Use the right word
into
show examples
the second pit
which
Punctuation problem
, which
show examples
is covered with a lid utilising a tunnel.
Then
Linking Words
, we can see that the fire is made with
combustion
Correct article usage
the combustion
show examples
of
air
Use synonyms
and wooden logs in that same pit. In the final step,
it is clear that
Linking Words
the smoke which
occured
Correct your spelling
occurred
with the combustion, moves along a pipe towards a covered box
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
kept above the ground level. The
food
Use synonyms
is being hung in that box. With the smoke, the
food
Use synonyms
get
Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
show examples
smoked and
get be
Wrong verb form
is
show examples
taken for consumption.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words food, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: