The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
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report is based on two pie charts, which illustrate the total imported vegetables in
Qatar
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and
Oman
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in 1990. A glance at the graph reveals that most imported vegetables in
Qatar
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and Homan were
garlic
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and spinach. Not only is
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point clear, but ginger
also
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shows similar shares for both countries,
while
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peas were low in
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, but not in
Oman
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. Notably, in
Oman
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, Spanish and
garlic
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showed the highest records at 600
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and 800
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respectively,
while
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in
Qatar
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, Spanish showed at 450
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and for
garlic
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at 340
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.
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, the proportion of broccoli in
Oman
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was 300
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,
while
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in
Qatar
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, just 220
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were
also
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; peas proportion in
Qatar
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was less than in
Oman
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by around 350 tons.
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,
garlic
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in both countries recorded the same proportion at 300
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words qatar, oman, garlic, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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