The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown in 1700 and 2000.

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The maps compare the layouts of a
town
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called Bridgetown in 2000 and in 1700.
Overall
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, Bridgetown has become a more built-up
town
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, with the addition of a railway, a school, and an expansion in the road network. In 1700, there was a river dividing the
town
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into two sections. The river stretched from northeast to southwest, intersecting with a road. At the crossing part of them, a bridge existed. In the north, it was a more civilian area with a marketplace, a castle, and some greenery,
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other parts were just farmland or empty areas.
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, in 2000, the castle
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demolished so that a school could be built in its place. The new bypass part of the road crossing the river
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, resulting in better accessibility.
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, a new railway line has been built, which stretches from the north of the marketplace to the east of the
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • land use
  • expansion
  • transformation
  • modernization
  • industrial
  • recreational facilities
  • housing development
  • transportation networks
  • demolished
  • constructed
  • preserved
  • evolution
  • adaptation
  • architectural styles
  • cityscape
  • historical preservation
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