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Band 1

These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?

the
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The
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 advantages
from
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of
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 people
leave
Verb problem
living
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 in rural areas are
they
Correct word choice
that they
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be
Wrong verb form
are
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a
Correct article usage
apply
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far away from
a
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apply
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people
travic
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traffic
 and
the
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apply
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have a
lowad
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more laid-back
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live
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life
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 and
a
Verb problem
spend a
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lot of
moment
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time
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 with
ther famliy
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their family
 and
childrean
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children
 and
take
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have
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 a
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to orginc
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orginc
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organic
 food
Linking Words
such
Punctuation problem
, such
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 as eggs,milk,meat and
vigetables
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vegetables
 if they have a farm. The
disadvantges
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disadvantages
 are
the
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that the
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 rural area
Verb problem
is alaways
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alaways
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always
 far away
fom
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from
 a big city
so
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, so
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 that will be a bad point if they
be
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are
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a
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apply
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sick because they need a good hospital
have
Verb problem
apply
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a
god
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good
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tols
Correct your spelling
tools
so
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, so
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 they will
traviel
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travel
 to reach it. And if they want to
loke
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look
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shoping
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shopping
well
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, well
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need
Correct word order
also need
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also
Linking Words
 to
traviel
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travel
 to
going
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go to
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 a good mall and
a
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apply
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good shops
Linking Words
Also
Punctuation problem
Also,
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 if they want to
Correct your spelling
travel
traviel
Punctuation problem
traviel,
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 they will need
hiding
Verb problem
apply
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to a big city have
a
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an
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internitaonl
Correct your spelling
international
 airport.

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planning
Plan what you say. Split the work into two parts: good sides and bad sides.
coherence
Use easy links like First, Also, But, Then to join ideas.
clarity
Try to write in two or three short lines per idea. Keep one idea in one line.
grammar
Check spelling and make the verbs fit. Use the right form.
content
You note time with family and farm food.
structure
You try to show both sides of the idea.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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