The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and the same area today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Two maps illustrate the past and current layout of the Beachfront area in Australia.
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, the entertainment area was enlarged
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new facilities were added. New club, extra parking and restaurant were built In 1950, there was a big road on the north side of the map.
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, the car park was placed on the north-east. The two 25-meter swimming pools were placed on both the west and east sides of the ocean. A small beach was located on the top of the reservoir. The playground was located next to the Pavilion. The pavilion is right next to the car park. On the south-east side, a lighthouse was positioned. By 2050, the playground was demolished and replaced with a new parking
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attaching to the main road. Two pools were enlarged to 50 meters. The remained locations
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the beach, lighthouse and pavilion. A new educational course called Surf Club has opened. The large road prolonged
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the lighthouse. Adjacent to the left surf club, the restaurant was created for the visitors

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