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We are becoming increasingly dependent on Artificial Intelligence (AI). It is now used in business, social media and transportation. What things will it be used for in the future? Is this dependence on AI a good thing or should we be concerned

There has been a debate over whether artificial intelligence is making
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humans
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 too dependent on technology. Artificial intelligence is very common today . Many
people
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 use AL in their daily life
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for
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example
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example,
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 on
phone
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the phone
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 , computer It is true that artificial intelligence
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apply
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make
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 life easier.
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 can do work faster and save time .
Student
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 can help with homework
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worker
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a worker
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 can solve problems easily . Al
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help
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people
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 find information quickly Despite the reason given
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 I am of the opinion that we should take into account other opposite
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 too. One reason is that
people
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 can become dependent on technology. Some
people
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 do not try to think by themselves and always use
AL
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AI
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. If technology does not
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work,
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 they may feel lost .
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Also
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people
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 may spend too much time on their
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phones
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 In
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 coming from the idea
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 I want to discuss one
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topic,
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it
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which
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 is important to consider both potential positive and negative sides

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structure
Make a clear plan before you write. Start with a short intro that states your main view. Then have 3 body parts, each with one idea and one small example. End with a short wrap-up.
coherence
Use links to show how ideas go from one to the next. Words like and, but, also, however help readers follow your thinking.
arguments
State your view about AI use in the future and give a reason or two to back it up. Give at least one simple example.
grammar
Check your grammar and spelling. Use full sentences and stop run-on thoughts. Read your work aloud to catch mistakes.
content
The topic is right and you try to share your view.
style
Sentences are mostly easy to read and ideas are not hard to find.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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