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The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June

The line graph illustrates different types of
contact
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 with a tourist office within the United Kingdom from January to June. From an
overall
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 perspective, there was an upward trend in the interaction through person and telephone,
whereas
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 the reverse pattern could be seen in the case of letter or email
contact
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. Notably,
while
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 standing at the lowest position from the beginning, face-to-face exchange rose at a dramatic rate, leading the chart. Regarding the increasing categories, despite a low of around 400, the figure for direct
contact
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 witnessed a significant growth, peaking at approximately 1900 towards the end of June. That for the telephone
also
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 mirrored the trend, albeit to a lesser extent.
Contact
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 with the tourist office was made at around 900 cases in January, surging with some fluctuations, with decreases in February and consistency from March to April. Afterwards, telephone communication had a peak at precisely 1600, remaining at a second value. Concerning letter or email
contact
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, a steady decline was documented in thoroughly 6 months. Starting from almost 800, it fell slowly and hit a low of about 400 from May to June.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words contact with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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